Welcome to My Site

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For those coming from dA, please comment here. I’ll keep track of who commented first so I can give out the prizes.

1. Holsyraccoon.
2. ShadowTails (who commented before I put up this blog)
3. Apacheman2K
4. Gustav45

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Finding Wisdom

James 1:5 NIV “If any of you lacks wisdom, he should ask God, who gives generously to all without finding fault, and it will be given to him.”

It’s amazing how much prayer can clarify things for you. Recently, I was trying to figure out something in my life. I tried and tried and tried, and no matter how I turned it around or asked advice, it didn’t get any clearer. And then in church, the pastor talked about seeking God’s face. I realized, “Gee. I haven’t really spoken to God about this.”

Now, I’ve prayed about it, but that’s not the same as seeking Him. Seeking Him is more focused and more intense than just saying a casual prayer. It’s being serious about asking and waiting (and expecting) an answer. And this time, I also planned to fast about it.

Thank God that He is a gracious, loving God because even though I was determined to seek His face and fast, I completely forgot about fasting and ate my fill that morning. But He still gave me the answer I was looking for–partly (mostly) because He is so kind, and partly (I think) because I was serious about seeking Him for the answer.

Is there a problem you have in your life? Seek God. Really seek Him. If you seek Him, you will find Him when you seek Him with all your heart (Jeremiah 29:13).

Ever Been Embarrassed?

Ever had something embarrassing happen to you? Worse yet, has it ever been all your fault?

That happened to me this week. I accidentally told a lie about someone. How do you accidentally tell a lie? Well, I suppose it’s not really a lie. I misunderstood some information and told a bunch of other people about it. No, not gossip . . . if it was true they would have needed to know about it.

Anyway, I should have known that the information I got was inaccurate because it didn’t sound like something the person would do. So I went back and checked. I should have done that first because when I realized I was wrong, I had to go back and call everyone to apologize about it. That was so embarrassing!

But I think I did the right thing, you know? I went back and did what it took to make it right even though I hated every minute of it.

So what about you? Have you ever done something stupid that caused you to be embarrassed? How did you handle it?

What is a Sentence

I have/host a writing club on deviantart.com called Writers in Progress (http://writers-in-progress.deviantart.com), and it came to my attention that several people have trouble with run-on sentences. So I decided to offer a tip to try and tackle the problem.

I started with what a sentence is . . . after all, how can you know what a run-on sentence is if you don’t know what a proper sentence looks like?

If you already know this stuff, read it anyway. It’s always nice to review.


What is a Sentence?
Sentences are the building block of a story. Without sentences, how could we write? Therefore, it is important that we learn what a sentence is and how it is put together.

Basically, a sentence is a set of words that expresses a complete thought. In the English language, a sentence has both a subject and a predicate. The subject is usually the noun plus any modifiers (ie adjectives, articles, etc.), and the predicate is usually the verb plus any modifiers (adverbs, complements, direct objects, etc.). If the sentence does not have one or the other, it is not a sentence. It is a fragment. If a sentence has a noun and a verb but does not express a complete thought, it is not a sentence. It is a fragment.

Look at the following.

Jenny brushed her hair. — sentence.
Jenny brushed. — sentence.
Brushed. — fragment.
In order for the girl to see the brook. — fragment.
In order for the girl to see the brook, she had to lean forward. –sentence.
She had to lean forward. — sentence.
Are you going to the prom? –sentence.
Go clean your room! — sentence.
Do your homework!–sentence.
Did my homework.– fragment.

Now, the last three may confuse you. Why are the first two (of the last three) sentences, and the last one a fragment? Where is the subject? Well, those two are imperative sentences. The subject is an “understood you.” In other words, when someone is giving a command, instead of saying, “You, do you homework,” they drop the “you” and just say “Do your homework.” In the last sentence, there is no command. Just a lonely fragment.

While fragments should generally be avoided in formal writing, in fiction writing, they can be a good tool. I often use fragments to convey a point. Even in an essay it can drive home a point. Do you see the fragment in the previous paragraph?

There are many different types of sentences and sentence structures, but I don’t want to get into that now. You can see more about sentences types by reading this article.

That’s it for now. Next week, I plan to tackle run-on sentences . . . God willing.

Publishing Update

So, I’ve finished “phase 1″ of the publishing process. The story has been sent and I eagerly (or nervously) await the edits from the editor. I feel like now is the time when I’ll find out how good (or bad) of a writer I really am. But either way, I think it will be good. If there are a ton of edits to be made, I’ll learn how to be a better writer. If not, then weeee!!!

BTW: I’ve done some pictures of the characters. Shall upload soon, God willing.